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But first, you decide to fly through 8 other stages for no apparent reason.

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Great review. I definately wouldn't trim the fat under "The Game" because there is a lot of useful information. I don't believe I've even heard of this game, but reading this gave me an idea on what to expect if I were to play it.
As for trimming the fat under "Experience," I think that's a judgement call. Personally though, I think you gave too much away.